Posted by werelynx at 2010-05-28 13:51:27 Voted 9.25 on 05/28/10
I like it a lot! Nice story:)
Posted by saraphinn at 2006-03-27 03:41:04 Voted 8.25 on 03/27/06
Good writing, seemed like a good solid introduction to a larger mod.
Posted by potatoesfried at 2006-03-11 07:14:53 Voted 1.00 on 03/11/06
It sukked bad. Noting hapens!
Posted by nereng at 2006-03-03 05:05:57 Voted 8.25 on 03/03/06
Hard to judge. It does show good writing skill and is interesting enough, but fits badly into the contest parameters IMO. I enjoyed it while it lasted, but then it ended abruptly. An introduction to a larger module?
Posted by MikeLM9215 at 2006-02-24 16:59:41 Voted 7.00 on 02/24/06
Well-written but totally linear until ending. Calling them wretches instead of savages or barbarians is distracting. Character never even close to being in control. Ending is a beginning. Could make a good module. I would certainly play it.
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Posted by thegeorge at 2006-02-22 11:22:22 Voted 8.50 on 02/22/06
I've tried most of these entries and I don't recall any of the other's using this premise, so kudos for that. I think this touched upon all the things that the guidelines called for. Thumbs up.
Posted by JeremyReimer at 2006-02-12 14:54:27 Voted 10.00 on 02/12/06
Posted by p_perry at 2006-02-08 15:30:17 Voted 5.50 on 02/08/06
It was well written, but it felt more like the introduction to a much larger mod, and not a side quest.
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